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If this is an essay, it should be in the non-fiction section.

Yes, indeed it was very graphic, but also very powerful. This really transported me into the place you're describing. I think it needs to be this graphic, or else it ...

As was already said, what is needed is more background. I didn't really get who these characters were. I mean, I got the basics, but they didn't feel real to ...

Come on! Doesn't anyone here like theatre?

Yes, it does rhyme pretty well. I really don't know what it's like to be in that sort of situation, but I think what it could use is more of ...

Last year, the CBC (Canadian Broadcasting Corportation) did a program called "The Greatest Canadian." On the top one hundred list were some of our favourtie celebrities, who are also great ...

This story sound eerily familiar.

Thank you Griffinkeeper. It's nice to see that I'm not the only one who thinks that it could be a combination of evolution and creationism. In fact, from what I ...

As for the title, I know you said you weren't sure about it. Not particularly creative, but it suits this one poem just fine.

My grandmother is a painter. A darn good one in my opinion, but she has a lot of trouble selling most of her paintings. Yet when she does something called ...

My library provides some pretty good reading lists. For the most part, though, I'm sticking to the easy stuff this summer. You're basic YA novels, a lot of media tie-in ...

This reads a lot more like an outline of a novel than an actual story. Your first problem is the opening. Rather than give an introduction to what the story ...

It was okay, but I found it lacking in . . . I dunno. Something.

What sort of socks would you give me? I am in dire need of a pair. As for this, not the kind of style I generally like, but I can ...

An okay first draft, but I think you need to make it more concise.