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There's also cases where people were born with facial abnormalities. Most of these don't effect the child's physical well-being or health, but children can be nasty. Society doesn't see a ...

Then it's not an essay.

Last line, fifth stanza, take out one of the "then"s.

Not sure I like it, but I enjoyed the spirit behind it. Careful about choosing words just because they rhyme.

Just about anything by Charles de Lint is always a good choice. Wolf Moon is a nice, light read. I really don't see the need to get heavy with summer ...

Everything seems like the best thing you've ever written when you're writing it. The important thing is to not feel bad when you realize it might not be, and learn ...

You are a very odd human being. I like that in a person.

Good idea, but the rhyming really does take away from the otherall effect of the piece.

Okaaaaaaaaaay. What the heck were you thinking when you wrote this?

I third that remark to Brad. Anywa, congrats Nate. And I can see why this site has been so successful, though. It's far better than TYWC ever was. I'm really ...

Well, plastic surgery really does make some people feel better about themselves. The key is to put things in perspective, and not go too far. Understand that it's just your ...

That's a very good point, Firestarter. It's also not only selfish but very lazy. The attitude that we must simply eliminate the problem rather than find out what caused the ...

Yes, essays can be stories, but just because something is a story doesn't mean it is fiction.

Yeah. In Ontario we have standardized testing, and I think in some other provinces. Only one of them really matters when it comes to moving on in your education. In ...

Actually, Disney started to go down after The Hunch Back of Notre Dam. They came close with a few other movies, but they just kept getting worse and worse. These ...