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Actually, there were a lot of things that made those elves different from humans. And so what if it's a fantasy? The dialogue still has to sound natural and real, ...

There are medications, herbal remedies. You could maybe talk to a counsellor or a doctor about making changes in your lifestyle. Or you could even find out why you have ...

I kind of like it. It was good that you actually gave the character some kind of identity beyond "he" as so many people do when they don't want to ...

I also didn't get into this. It was really lacking in several areas. Your opening paragraph were good, but once the dialogue began, the quality of the narrative dropped considerably. ...

You also have to talk to them like people. They are not "just children." It's so easy for adults and teens to forget they were kids once.

The way to punish unruly five-year-olds: Take away toys. In corner for five minutes. Send to sit in principal's office if still out of control. Why did this woman become ...

Yes, I know no-tolerance policies exist for a reason, but they don't work. As I have said, in Toronto, it only made matters worse. Even if this girl was misbehaving ...

I think Griffinkeeper pretty much said most of what you need to know. I only read half of this because I couldn't follow what was happening. Your first few paragraphs ...

Very nice. I loved your use of language in this. Very simple, yet very elegant. There are some really great images and ideas here. But I felt that there wasn't ...

YAHOO! I finally finished it. Not I feel like I can actually post something else. All insults are welcome, though high praise and suggestions for improvement are prefered.

I'm just going to accept this for what it is and say I enjoyed reading it. Not exactly proper poetry, but I can tell it must have been a great ...

An elderly lady typing in the computer next to me and beeping from the check-out desk.

Go randomness! Me like muchly. Very amusing.

Absolutely beautiful! There aren't enough poets, especially teens, who write poetry about nature. Great work. Lovely imagery, and where you had rhyming, it worked really well.

Is this supposed to be an acknowledgement of the problems your country has?