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Not much of a poem, but it's a good rant.

What kind of question is that? Tolkien, of course. Star Wars or Star Trek?

My teacher made the idiot move of putting the idea in my head that the CN (Canadian National) Tower could get hit. My father works right by there.

My family has the defective Baumander gene. I don't know if I could describe them, but we often say or do things that seem odd to the casual observeer, but ...

Both. Frozen stiff in Carbonite or full-speed ahead?

I know what it's like to be in an empty theatre after a show, and you got it right on. Good work. It could, perhaps, use a minor revision, mainly ...

Great ideas. But there are a few things you could do to make it even better. Reformat it, maybe make it a little longer, with a three or four paragraphs. ...

While I enjoyed the story, I thought there was just too much missing. This would be wonderful if you showed us why they feel the way they do about their ...

I have read real and fictional diaries. and they didn't have full conversations in them, even if they do have some direct speech. I also found that a lot of ...

I will have to add to the list of people who are utterly confused.

Do you people have some problem understanding my Canadian? It's not all that different from American English. I said that the people who WERE spanked had those problems.

Yeah, it really is hard to define when you live in a country like New Zealand or America. For me, it's really hard to define as well. I hate it ...

Yes, but there is a difference between talking to children so they will understand you and talking to them like lesser beings or a separate species, as I have seen ...

Yes, but they still get more of their own in Europe than Canadians do. I'm not talking about us getting a little bit of American television with Canadian. I'm talking ...

I'm certainly not going to bash you for vagueness, because this really worked. There was enough to create a clear image of what was happening, and to make the reader ...