Rei

One of my novels was actually based on Labyrinth. There, I spelled it right this time. Only I strayed away from the fairy-tale style of the story and made it ...

Not sure I really got it. I often miss what really good poetry is about, but I enjoyed reading it. It sounded very nice.

Very raw, very real. I wouldn't call it poetry, exactly, but that doesn't matter. What matters is that this was from the heart, and you didn't hold back in any ...

^Has no sense of timing when wanting to chat on AIM.

^Posted just before a raving lunatic who shouldn't be taken half as seriously as everyone here does. Tee hee.

I second what Hunter said. Split up the paragraphs, and slow it down big time. The story could be great if it's given the proper time and attention. Grammar note: ...

Has a mysterious penname.

Why is everyone so obesessed about whether or not something is cliched? Sometimes things are used a lot for reasons other than a lack of imagination or talent.

Has a far-too-long, odd, custom rank.

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^ probably has an accent I will one day find very sexy. (what can I say, I have a weakness for brits and aussies)

Doesn't anyone else have a public library they can go to when their home computers aren't behaving? Normally I'm the one being told this, but lighten up, it's just a ...

I so agree with you on the part where he shouted "No" and the comedy at the beginning. I like comedy in movies, but I don't like comedy for the ...

Doesn't realize I don't take this thread seriously

^ Posted at the same time as me and mucked it up.