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Re: Bullies you're either one our get bullied by one
Ah, I see where you misinterpreting me. Perhaps you think my saying it exists meant I was saying "It will exist for you," which is not what I said. How ...
May 26, 2005 -
Re: Flat Cliche
Yeah. Sounds great. I could really imagine this being set to music. I wasn't too fond of how many lines started with "Tired of". It would probably have the same ...
May 26, 2005 -
Re: Going Outside (incomplete, by a long shot)
That's great if it's going to be something that's just for yourself. But if it's going to be something that other people will read, it has to have something that ...
May 26, 2005 -
Re: Star Wars Premiere *SPOILER WARNING*
Oh yeah. it's fun to make jokes while watching a movie. I don't think it was too much for a 14A movie. All you really have to do is close ...
May 26, 2005 -
Re: Corduroy Summers
Really powerful. Wasn't sure I understood what it was about until I read the last few lines, but It still managed to hold my attention.
May 26, 2005 -
Re: person above ya!
^ Is an unconscious rodent
May 26, 2005 -
Re: In Wonderland (Chapters 1&2)
It's always nice to see people doing their own interpretations of fairy-tales. The language you use is just perfect. But you need to split up the paragraphs better so its' ...
May 26, 2005 -
Re: A Different Kind of Goblin 1: Crossing
I've looked over this a dosen times, and I don't see the spelling errors. I think what everyone thinks is errors is really just Canadian English.
May 26, 2005 -
Re: Bullies you're either one our get bullied by one
I applaud your effort, but Nai doesn't care. He just wanted to make himself feel good by giving a kid with a shattered knee some morephine but ignoring what actually ...
May 26, 2005 -
Re: Scissors, needles 'left behind' after caesarean
That is simply disgusting. How could anyone be so careless?
May 26, 2005 -
Re: person above ya!
^ Is one of the only other members who is as old as me.
May 25, 2005 -
Re: Guardian of Heaven Chapter 1
*shakes head* Grammar. "I like nights like this." The man said. is wrong. You should have a comma instead of a period, and "The" does not need to be capitalized, ...
May 25, 2005 -
Re: Language is confuzzling!
Don't I know it. I've been studying Japanese and it is soo hard. Strangely enogh, I actually had a harder time in french. Here's the different words for "you" in ...
May 25, 2005 -
Re: person above ya!
^ Doesn't believe I am evil
May 25, 2005 -
Re: Martial Artists
It really is quite impressive, Snoink, but utterly mad.
May 25, 2005
