Rei

I'm kind of with Galatea on the issue of idolizing people. But I do have many writers and story-tellers I admire. First and foremost are Jim Henson and George Lucas. ...

Then why not just simplify things by making them different colours, or giving them names? Is there a really good reason for not giving names? In some books, when enemies ...

Are the two white dragons identical in every way? If not, make sure you have a very clear image of what they both look like and find certain qualities that ...

Hmmm. I think it'll get more done in the park than at home. What were you thinking the last time you read a really crap book?

Yeah, saying he had a rough childhood is pretty irrelevant. Many people had rough childhood. Many turn into criminals, but many don't. I'm with Galatea on this one. If he ...

I don't think the kind of home you come from is really relavent. But I wouldn't join, either way. I'm a pacifist, and prefer to avoid violence except as a ...

Yeah, the paragraphs are a problem. It was okay, but the clumped-together paragraphs made it a bit hard to read.

Didn't really like it. Vague almost alwasy bugs me.

Once you've chosen, where will they be posted?

Then why do we still have points, just to show participation? You don't need to advertise your story. It will get read, and you will recieve crits as long as ...

I'm glad finally took the initiative to point this problem out. But I'm also a little disappointed in the people who made it necessary. I mean, if we won't use ...

I'm just about to go change my signature. I think I'll use smething my cousin said lst April. We were talking about what it means to be cool, or something ...

Oh yeah, the perfect "I love my cat" poem.

There was nothing about this that made me want to read beyond the first few sentences. Your language was very wooden, and there was really nothing about it to distinguish ...

Wow. Very disturbing. Great tension. This had a bunch of the things I normally don't like to see, like present-tense narative, lack of information, and very sparse visuals, used exactly ...