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It's interesting, but I'm not sure I understand what it's about, or how the title relates to it.

Well, fairy-tales were deceptively rather simple, but don't be decieved by most North American retellings. If you know where to look, you can find anthologies and collections that haven't been ...

The whole thing looks very unprofessional, in my opinion. You've got very poor punctuation, for one thing. There many many sentences all rolled into one here. I would change the ...

Got a lot of fancy language and creative sentence structure that was probably there to create tone and atmosphere. But in the end, I got so lost in the words, ...

Vote Rei Tee hee (I don't really care what category. It would be nice enough to know that people notice me.)

My suggestion: slow down, pace yourself. This is less than 1500 words, when it could easily be three or four chapters each twice that length. Take your time to set ...

Usually, neither do I. But the whole story with the prom, it was so incredible because Brad and I got to prove that we're not the stereotypes we appear to ...

Hm. Tough question. I think I'd have to open it with "Underground" by David Bowie, and perhaps his more recent song from his CD Heathen, "Afraid." As things get more ...

I think I'm going to have to go along with Teodore on this one. The feelings are there, but not in a way that will make the reader feel anything. ...

This was very whiny and boring. The sort of effect you want to create with such a poem, I'm assuming, is to gain sympathy. When I read this, all it ...

Also, not everyone knows how or is able to. Not that I could win with my funny hips.

Recently, my brother and his girlfriend went to their prom. Throughout school, my brother and I have always been on the outskirts of the school social circle. We've both been ...

Muse, in North America we call them costume parties. I wonder if anyone has costume parties not on Halloween or Purim. However, if you love dancing, giving yourself a prom ...

Normally I hate being blunt, and try (unsuccessfully) to be gentle. In this case I'm going to make an exception. There are three words that I think best describe this ...

I'm happy because I'm listening to my favourite song, and you don't need any other reason than that. Tee hee!