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Interesting idea, making the giant's name David. The story and Iza's relationship with Andrew is certainly progressing well, but I wish you would have more narrative details. Like kitty said, ...

It's true that the theory is that if you're an adult you will be more prepared for the consequences of sex. As mature as teenagers often think they are, they ...

Ah, Finals. I feel your pain. Good luck.

Does the pizza place have any special deals on right now?

I can't really say if I like or dislike any of the characters at the moment. We're in show-don't-tell territory here. You breeze through everything so quickly, and don't give ...

This is odd.

I don't bite. Least not until after I've cooked you.

The grog must have made it to my system now because there was a somewhat pleasant buzzing in my head. I don't think they would use a term like system ...

I agree with you on this being somewhat of a skeleton, yoyo. I'd love to see it with more detail and drawn out more. With this section, I have three ...

I agree with shotgun, text messageing only. Or IMing, I guess. But not on emails or in speech. Then it's just annoying. In emails, especially if it's for business or ...

You're so right, Gal. It's so sad how often kids are misdiagnosed. I have anxiety disorder, and I've read that anxiety disorders are constantly being misdaignosed with depression (though we're ...

I agree with Lynn, to a point. All the stanzas were very different, and it might have read much better if it had some consistency in the lines per stanza ...

Does anyone ever tell me anything?

Oh yeah. Totally normal. Sythe is right. Take a break. Read things that may inspire the story, but don't make a point of thinking about the story, and just rest ...

Why do you want to know?