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Meh. Harkness wants people who will be brutal. I'm just preparing him/her from what I'm like as a critiquer. But I'm really very nice when I'm not giving crits.

Welcome and bievenu. I look forward to reading your work and absolutely tearing apart your work. I am cruel at times, but you'll be better for it in the future.

Can anyone tell me what has happened to my feline overlord?

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Since when were there any monkeys around here?

Did the dogs kill all the cats?

Hey, sometimes those words just work. Besides, if you're writing a first-person narrative, or even a third-person in some cases, if the characters talk that way, why not use them? ...

So what happened to our feline overlords?

Do you mean to say you think our feline overlords are nothing?

There's not much going on in this. I'm a big believer in any story being good if it's told properly, but this was not told properly. It lacked dramatic tension ...

Aren't their main concerns with territory, good food, pride, and having another cat or human to shnuggle with?

I think my brain melted from reading all this. Time for ice cream. That'll get it all back into one piece. Mmmmmm. Chocolate. *drools*

Do you think that even if they can, that they care?

You are just plain evil, Sureal.

No, she doesn't need to be put down. That would be sad. We just need to shoot her full of thorazine.