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Here's something my mother once said on the topic. There are only thirty-six stories. All the rest is interpretation.

How dare you call anything Mel Brooks has done dumb! Forgot. The movie my last quote is from is Endless Waltz. Here's another quote I love: Sarah:Ow! It bit me! ...

It's actually "So we can learn to pick ourselves up." :P "I need to dermine for myself whether or not peace at the expence of lives can really be defined ...

Perhaps it will come out the ear. Meh. If it does, you should call it Mimi.

I saw it this afternoon. It scared the living daylights out of me. There were literally points where I wanted to leave the theatre, but didn't want my mom to ...

I'm not a big fan of this sort of prologue. In this case, it's all right, since I can tell you're going to probably be refering to it later on, ...

The story is pretty good, but I felt you could do more with it. It was great the way you started it. I wasn't sure exactly what was going on ...

How could you think the pigeon was pointless? Meh. Maybe you just do't get the symbolism yet. I thought the fact that she hinted rather than actually describing it helped ...

At this stage in the game, it's not really necessary to do revisions. When you're still learning, it's better to write as many stories as you can, rather than focus ...

Naw. The ebst of us are born that way :P

I'm a little busy, so I can only comment on your opening. The part in italics isn't necessary. There realy is no point in telling us what the story will ...

It starts out great, though the narrative has a bit too much poetic description for my taste. When you're being vague about the past, it works. You give just the ...

It's an okay start, but it didn't convey the feelings very strongly, either because you didn't understand them properly or because you were holding back. Try delving into the emotions, ...

Yep. This is definitely the right place to be. I'd be happy to help you with your first novel. I've written some short novels already, and think I've got a ...

This sounded like the end of a story rather than something that can stand on its own. Perhaps it would be interesting to delve deeper into the life of this ...