Rei

Tee hee. Me like, me like.

Sounds cool. I wish we could do that now. Too bad I have no ear for music, so it's really hard for me to imagine words on a screen/page as ...

Ooh. An annonymous "she" or "he" is rarely a good thing. I must confess, whenever I come across that, I stop reading immediately. You've got a good concept, but it ...

You definitely handled this topic well. It's so easy when writing a sex scene to fall into disgusting smut, or overly poetic imagery. The pace was perfect, and the tone ...

*pouts* That's not fair! I wanna be sarcastic on Wednesdays!

Sounds all right if you know what to do with it. And in my opinion, depending on the kind of story, it doesn't really matter how many other people have ...

Yeah, I also hope we keep the community feel. One thing I've noticed, though, is that while we seem to have a new member every day, very few of them ...

I'm not sure present-tense was really the best decision for a piece like this. Overall, it was well-written and the character were good, but it seemed kind of pointless. As ...

Oh yeah. When I read people writing like that, it's so annoying. It's a struggle to keep focused on the actual story. Sometimes I'll stop all together, depending on what ...

It's a good start, but I think you could do more with it, maybe add one or two verses.

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I really don't understand the point of not using capital letters. It just makes it look very imature, like you don't know the rules of your own langauge.

I don't know how you would squish a weta, and personally, I'm not all that keen on killing bugs anyway, other than the really tiny ones I can get with ...

I regret to inform you that I do not. I've never really liked poetry full of questions. Writing it with a tone of uncertainty that expresses a desire for these ...

Yes, very lovely. Just an honest, heart-felt piece of writing. Not very poetic, but it's so real, not trying to be more than it is, that it doesn't matter.