Rei

This is fantastic! The rhyming was worked in so smoothly that I hardly noticed, and you expressed your theme wonderfully, without being obvious.

Not really. Remember, you're only a year older than me, if that. But I never played video games anyway. If it was a Japanese game that's probably the reason for ...

*Pulls all the dancing people into my faerie circle so they'll dance until they burn to ash*

*smiles and backs away slowly*

Okay, but I was mainly refering to the utter lack of proper grammar in that sentence. That's why I got confused.

Oh, don'tcha just hate it when you have to do creative writing for school. It's the worst. Especially length restrictions

I just thought I'd announce now, even though it is still several weeks away, that I will likely be gone for good come September because I'll be going back to ...

I still think making a phase illegal is stupid.

"All your base are belong to us" What the heck does that mean?

What she said. And as for the last line, that depends. Sometimes I see in books where they use older dialects of English they'll use the "to be" verbs differently ...

Ripped up jeans and a red T-shirt. Ain't got nuthin on my feet. I've hardly worn shoes at all in the last three weeks. But for some strange reason I ...

Yes, I can see why you normally don't write poetry. But this isn't terrible. It amused me.

I find this obsession you all have with goats to be rather unhealthy. I fear you must be committed to my mental hospital.

See, that's the scary thing. We do eat bugs in our sleep.

I suppose so. But let's not turn this into a serious discussion. Igeeboo. Orbins. Ishkabible.