Rei

What a fabo name for a pencil! My mom teases me because I'm attatched to my pencils. Sometimes she'll ask me if they have names. Maybe I should name one ...

Well, that was depressing. But it's a well-expressed idea and Coke is a great metephore for it.

What an idea!

We had a festival?

It seems like the problem with the flow is that you're using some long sentences. Try rewriting it with very short sentences and sentence fragments.

I wonder how Snape would look if someone shaved his head. Hmm, something to consider, isn't it.

Okay, how can you have a forum prom?

Why would anyone want to eat Depp? he's so cool. And only I can have Hayden. Besides, we live in the same city. :P

Yuo really are mad.

Don't worry, Ari. I'll still be here for the next little while.

And I hate you. Tee hee.

paka

Okaaaaaaaaaay. Now there's a whole lot of information I didn't need to know. But what I said before is still true. I know people from Japan who said that the ...

They don't teach English properly in Japan.

Yeah, I'll have go with what Mesh said. All this really needs is to slow down and be expanded upon a little.