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^ Is younger than me (Technically anyway. In my mind I'm twelve)

Actually, our freedom of speech laws are essentially the same. As long as it's not overtly racist or sexist you can wear pretty much any shirt you want.

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It is too bad about that rule, but I think one of the reasons they have that is because classes are meant to help prepae you for the professional world. ...

In a recent Toronto Blue Jay's game, the one which lasted 18 innings, two young men only got to see the first three. The reason? They wore Ed the Sock ...

Good point. There isn't anything that special about Harry Potter other that it's massive success. If you do a little research, you'll find lots of books about schools for witchcraft.

Personally, I dislike terms like Indian, unless refering to peopel from India, Redskins, and Native American. That's because America is a name that Europeans gave to the country, not what ...

It's just a story. Sure, the characters lie and break the rules at times, but in the end, what would happen if they hadn't broken the rules would have been ...

Yeah, that last line is no good. And so what if it's a cliche or not. That's not the problem with this poem. The problem is that it seems very ...

I wouldn't say there's too much dialogue. But rather, there is not enough narrative details. You know, like visual descriptions, physical action, and the like. My comments on your other ...

Think about only your story, and stay away from other love stories. Also, just stay true to your character and who s/he is. Carefully placed humour always helps, too. The ...

Too true, too true. We can't be afraid of any kind of language if we're going to be writers. Yet at the same time, we need to know where best ...

As was said, there are those who we won't like, or won't like us. There isn't much that can be done about that. And yes, more crit, and things to ...

This is one of those cases where a prolgue really isn't needed. I read your first chapter without realizing that this prologue was a part of the story. It's something ...

What's up with you and Zues's beard?