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*Does and Irish jig* Drinks all around. *Randomly starts hitting people on the head with a rolled up poster* Those things are the official head-boppers at my volunteer job, you ...

yes, I remember now, that's the one. I didn't like it. It was utterly pointless, and has no real redeaming value because the boys don't leave, even when they are ...

No, there are times when you use had. Let me give you an example if the difference. "I'm feeling terrible because my boyfriend has dumped me." "I was feeling terrible ...

TBR got all the grammar stuff. The idea is all right, though it could use some more narrative detail. There were a couple of things that did annoy me, though. ...

Guess it depends on the soap, and if you hurt the kid while you're doing it. But does that really teach a kid not to swear? I mean, it's not ...

I don't know why, but I dislike the world glad. Eesh. I just don't like the way it sounds.

I don't think he was wanting them for himself. More likely he would get them for his daughter or son.

In general, commercials for cereal are kind of annoying. Though there are some good ones, like the one where a a man is sitting at the coffee table, eating Cherrios ...

^ won't tell me what other kinds of reptilian beings are in his army

Yes, it is in the past, but when you're writing in present-tense and refering to things that happened in the past, you use has. Had is used with you're writing ...

^ Commands a small army of reptilian beings that come in a variety of colours

^ commands an army of small green-and-yellow dragons

I can't really read much of it, but the drawings will be all right once you clean them up a bit. One nitpick from the words I can read: My ...

^Bob

Thanks, Snoink. I hate essay-writing, and I know I have written better essays than this, but it's the only one I kept. Too bad I didn't keep my essay on ...