Red_Star_Girl

Thanks for the review. The bit about scrawling, was actual. I keyed it in his car one night...Stupid, silly immature bad move, which I don't advise to anyone! Lol. I ...

I thought as it was fathers day tomorrow this was quite fitting. Daddy? You never came. Full of broken promises from the start No, before even. Did you think that ...

Hey...Thanks for the reviews guys :-) First off, Mummy is "mommy" in the UK, just to clear that up, I'm not talking about Egyptian mummies, hehe :-) Secondly, the intro ...

I like it, It's quirky and cute, some of the rhyming is a bit questionable. I assume it's suppose to be lighthearted and not too serious, althought when I first ...

I wrote this today, it's kind of about being stuck and misunderstood. Let me know what you think! :-) Thanks 'Tied up' Not available, that’s how I feel. A new ...

Thanks for the reviews :-).... The whole essence of the poem is in the contrasts, so without the two at start is kind of in my eyes necessary, summer/winter, which ...

Hmmm. Well I don't want to be mean....here goes. To be honest it reminds me of the tragic sort of 'emo' type poetry I use to write as a kid, ...

I am inclined to agree with April here, the last stanza is a bit rushed almost, like you wanted to finish it so didn't put an awful lot of thought ...

Wow! A lot of questions Y! Hehe :-) Right well, let start with what I love reading... my faviourite writers are Virginina Woolf, George Orwell, Emile Zola, Elizabeth Wurtzel, Jeannette ...

I really liked this poem, it was very descriptive of being at a concert from both the artist and the crowds point of view. Really made you feel like you ...

This is a poem I wrote a few months back, its about falling in love and realising that all the times you thought you were in love before was no ...

I liked it, Although a few points to consider. Firstly, you said you didn't really know what it was about. With poetry thats the point, you have to know what ...

Hey :-) I agree with the last comment, Its a bit short, you should add to it and re-post it. But it looks like a very promising start to a ...

Hey everyone :-) I've just discovered this place ( I saw discovered, my little cousin linked me too it ) Thought I'd introduce myself. I'm 22, towards the older side ...