RedWing

thanks :)

haha thanks =]

this is for my creative writing class. They made us do some stupid poem with the theme being "wow". so i had absolutely no idea what to write about...... Wow ...

wow i really liked it =] sorry im not all that great at advice when it comes to poetry, but i enjoyed it. It didn't seem to really ever go ...

I do agree with you on many things. i think it evil just to kill them for fur when we could just wear fake fur which looks pretty much the ...

ok i seperated it into stanzas. maybe that will make it less confusing... thanks for the help :)

Standing tall and all alone, but yet, I don't complain. I need the sun and air to live, and six liters of rain. My trunk is like a castle. built ...

hey thanks a lot :D This was a a true story that happened with more than one of my friends. but i don't really care anymore. i figure if they ...

thanks for the critiques ill try and fix it as best i can :)

When we were young near three or four, And thought the world was big and great We’d play like friends just like friends should, Not knowing the emotion “hate” When ...

Thanks for the comments :)

Only thing though, The part about Bane eating a human heart and knowing the ways of man sound like Sgorr from the book Fire Bringer by David Clement-Davies.... But Otherwise ...

Thanks for the critiques! ill try an edit this :D

I dont get it. I typed this on Microsoft word with paragraphs, but when i submitted it on here they just left...

All I ever wanted was to be normal. I wanted to have friends and family who loved me and to be known as Lauren instead of the weird girl who ...