RedHill

My best friend left a will before she died. She wanted me to destroy any trace of her and her demon , a nd with that she sealed it inside ...

She [s]seeked[/s] sought revenge and she got it. S he stood next to the body of the girl who had been her best friend. To look at the body of ...

The first to visit Naruto was a girl. She entered the room looking sad, almost depressed. She had short pink hair, with her headband tied behind her bangs. Her jacket ...

Two years had past since Momo first met Kai and they went to the Grass village academy. But after the 2nd year Momo’s mother discovered and was going to end ...

Momo [s]had[/s] entered a forest and pushed past the low tree branches . [s]Momo[/s] She had almost completely forgotten about her life-threatening wound , o nly a small stinging feeling ...

“ Now, now Momo you should know better than trying to go outside , ” a n older woman explained to [s]the[/s] eight-year-old Momo. The little girl dressed in a ...

I liked this, overall. By focussing on this character right now, and the action she's in, you do manage to draw the reader in. I don't usually read stories with ...