RedBird

Okay...That really clarified things! I'm sorry that I failed to notice that these things were literal. Most, if not all of the "bogged down metaphors" have been cleared, so great! ...

Thanks! I guess I did better than I thought...I did make some edits, though!

Wow. Thanks for all the reviews! I didn't think anybody would notice it for a while. I made some changes based on your ideas, and it works better now, I ...