RedBird

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>>>Ok, I thought Cutter was there, but I guess not, so...

>>>No, crescent, that's fine! Only, if you do another character, lets have it be another race, 'kay? We have a lot of waifs...

>>>This is the mastermind of the waif plot

Thanks for the reviews! I made of few of the edits you suggested...

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>>>Your character's fine, Apple!

In the Third Age of Flight, phraxships plow across the skies of the Edge, and phraxweapons abound, but this world is still as dangerous and full of intrigue as it ...

This just popped into my head right here you go! Please review! Passing Time is going, flowing by. And if you try to catch it, Ever will you lose. In ...

Hmmmm, this has the potential to be pretty good if you do some serious editing. First and foremost, although your rhythm is fairly okay, it could do with shaping up. ...

Hey there! Reddy here for a review! First things first...This was put together fairly well. I think that the different colors went well with this poem, and made it stand ...

Cutter, I cough, and open my eyes. There's a pulsing pain in my forehead, and I feel a trickle of warm liquid travel down the bridge of my nose. I ...

Can we start this?

>>>Okay, fine. Here we go again. One of the main reasons that this fell apart was that some people, not pointing any fingers, tried to take the plot into their ...

Ah, some political satire...If that's what you intended. That's just how I took it. But, anyhoo... I liked it. The wording was quite nice, except for a few wee spots, ...