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Re: Misfit Circus
Kili, control emotions, I approach the new guy. His name is Markus, I think. He looks kind of withdrawn. I work my mind into his and am delighted to find ...
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Nick, teleporter, Once I managed to get all of the other boys into the tent, and finally laid down by the entrance, I couldn't sleep. I tossed and turned, but ...
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Kili, controls emotions, I narrow my eyes at Fee and Nick as they walk away from me. I do not like the way that things are going for me. Still, ...
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Nick, teleporter, When Fee and I reach the fire pit, I turn to her. "The new guy. Markus. I let him come, but there's something not quite right about him, ...
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Nick, teleporter, I stare at the boy in front of me. The boy who just used the weather like it was a sword. He would probably be a good addition ...
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Kili, control emotions, I grin and skip into the girl's tent. Then I stop short because Fee and Lurie are in there as well. I can't stand those two, I ...
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Nick, teleporter: I sit glumly next to the burned out fire from our last meal. It seems that after Daemyn and Fee had that argument, nobody knows what to do. ...
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Nick was with you from the beginning.
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Nick, teleporter: Fee and Alura have just gone back to girls tent, leaving me with Daemyn and Kili. I ignore Kili and turn to Daemyn. "Would it really be all ...
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Kili: I smile and draw close to the van, watching the emotions run high between Fee, Auguste and Nick. Maybe their defenses will be down and I can heighten the ...
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Nick: I sigh and look around at the camp we've just set up. The tents are worn out, threadbare and full of holes, but Fee still refuses to get new ...
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Re: And it came...
Wow. Thanks for all the reviews! I didn't think anybody would notice it for a while. I made some changes based on your ideas, and it works better now, I ...
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I guess I'll post my not-so-nice character. Name: Kili Joy Age: 13 Power/Act: She can change and influence people's emotions, she can make them sad, happy, jealous...murderous, any emotion you ...
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Re: Darkness Unpolluted
Astounding! The imagery in this poem was some of the best I've ever seen, and the rhythm was quite smooth, for the most part. The only thing that was an ...
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Re: Misfit Circus
I think Washington State is a good setting for the story.
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