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Re: No More Reviews Needed
Wow. That's a really awesome drawing. I like the gold on the eyes and the earrings, as well as the clear cut lines on the tunic/shit. Her smile is very ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: In a crowd full of faces
In a crowd full of faces In all these different places and in all these vast spaces; I liked this opening line- it caught my attention. Original. Yours is the ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: I Was Wrong
I thought you were on my side, I thought you would choose me, Over healing something, That's point is lost at sea. I thought that you'd understand, My relation to ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Bad Jokes
Dang....that freaked me out, let me say that right now. He was totally crazy. I think it was amazing- hope you win :D RA
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Kindred
This poem showed me deep, strong feelings for someone. I'm not sure who, but I know that they're there. I really liked it, BTM. I've told you this before, but, ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Scars: Impending Storm Chapter One
Ahem. May I just say that I love this? I mean, I did help write it, but I still go _DAYUM._ when I look at it. Thank you to everyone ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Love Don’t Promise
Wow...this poem made me stop and blink. "I’ve been hurt by true love before. It’s hard to love you, When I love like a whore. And I’ve never felt so ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Fragile Things
May I have permission to say that this made me cry? Well, almost anyway, (it's been a long day.) This poem had a style of...hmm, airyness? Aloofness? Outerworldlyness? To it. ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Stonger Than Love
Twisting, gnawing, boring, drilling Pain- is there something more filling? Love is fleeting, filled with sorrow, Pain is there, pain is tomorrow. Nothing claws inside the heart, Nothing rips a ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Drive
I think that the poem is excellent. You managed to turn something like a simple car-ride into something that is interesting and fun to read about. I liked your word ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: A drab gray room
This poem was....saddening, in a way that's hard to capture. Like the view of someone locked in an insane asylum, staring out the single window into the night sky. I ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: If You Fell...
This poem was good, but confused me a little. Perhaps it was because I couldn't really pick up the style. However, the concept is excellent. It presents good visuals, I.e. ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Aivila
I don't understand why Why I'm deep in this mess. I thought I'd fix problems, I thought I could dress- The wounds that the fighting Has left in our soul, ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Influenza
First off, the story was fantastic. I loved the stye, which was calm and elegant, and above all, the descriptions. You're excellent with that, in all of your work. You ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: My Reason
If I were to put a finger On the reason That I wake up each day I could not Do so. But now I have found my reason- And it ...
Jun 17, 2011
