ReadySetStay

Hi! Thanks for the review guys. The story was supposed to be a bit odd, so I guess I achieved that? ^.^; Hah. Anyway, ziggie, can you tell me what ...

Thanks for the reviews, guys. :) I've gone back and fixed many a far as the coloring of her world, this whole black and white scale thing, I think I'm ...

Thank you for your reviews! :) I have decided to go back and change from the second-person narration to first-person narration during the death sequence. After attempting it, I have ...

Thank you all for your reviews! :) And about the issues with the prologue, I never really considered chopping it off all together, but perhaps I might just do that ...