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Deep inside a wishing well; A light shining the traveler's way. Even though never seen. Nor never touched. It was wished upon many a time In fact, that light did ...

I am in a rush, therefore I do not have much time to write a big review, but I thought there was something in need of saying. You used very ...

Hoopster here to review I review a little differently. Instead of reviewing your poem as a whole, I like to focus in on an area. My area of concern is ...

I am just starting to write poetry. What do you guys think? The Beach Man Blues On an off tilt stroll, through the cumbersome court, Lay the sand of an ...

This poem definitely seemed like it was a great idea. However, the structure and content seemed forced. In poetry, especially narrative, you want to allow the reader to grasp the ...

Like others have said. This is a beautiful concept and idea to write a poem off of. However, it is rater literal, and somewhat simple. This poem would be amazing ...

Hello all. I am just a young man beginning to dive into the realms of poetry. I tend to avoid poems about love, suicide, and depression, just because they do ...

This is a nice poem, and has a great idea. It is maybe a little to simple for my taste, and quite literal, but this is your poetry, so I ...

This poem completely took me by surprise. When I was reading the first few lines I was thinking to myself - "Ugh I have heard this same poem so many ...

I thought that his poem had a very simple structure, but a deep undertone. It was brilliant to read because of the double meaning. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. However, ...

I am just starting to write poetry. What do you guys think? The Beach Man Blues On an off tilt stroll, through the cumbersome court, Lay the sand of an ...