Razzker

You're welcome! I'm glad that I helped. I see that you've edited it. It's a lot better now and I really want to read the rest. Good job on this ...

a gargantuan piece

Unfortunately, the capybara henchmen had other, equally deadly weapons of mass destruction.

The story is quite good, but there were three major problems: punctuation, spelling and sentence structure. Plot : 8/10 The plot, story-wise, was quite interesting but it could definitely be ...

You know, you could really turn this into a good story. It's actually pretty good for a six-year-old!

for one fairest in all the lands means she's beautiful.....have you ever heard of snow white?!? she's born to evil parents therefore she is obviously going to become evil in ...

I think ‘pursuers’ would be a better choice than ‘chasers’. Also, you start every sentence with ‘he did this, he did that’. It’s pretty noticeable. He couldn’t see the Incubi ...

Interesting concept and story! Plot : 8/10 So far, the plot was quite interesting and it definitely captured my attention. Characters : 6/10 Some of the characters were a bit ...

I've updated the Author's note. : )

I've read the version before this one and I can clearly see the difference! This is much better than the other one. You've written a really good story there -- ...

Razzker's Razztazztic Reviews is now OPEN for business! What I Review I will gladly review your work. I do specialize in Fantasy and Science Fiction, though. I will review your ...

Hi, Lava! Could you review my short story? It's in the Fantasy genre. Thanks in advance! Blue Flames and Bloodshot Eyes

Hi there! Would you like to review my short story? It's a Fantasy short story. : )

Hello! Would you like to review my short story?

Oopsie. I didn't know referencing Twilight would be so negative. I shall remove it at once. Additionally, I will edit the orb part, thanks for that, Adeera! As for the ...