Razzker

Thanks for pointing out those mistakes. Much appreciated. And thanks for your input as well!

Author's Note Sorry for the very long wait. School work was insane and I had a lot of exams to complete. But I'm getting Lebaran holidays since I live in ...

Thank you for the review, TheBlackSheep! : ) I haven't had time to edit both chapters extensively, but once I do, I'll let everyone who wants to keep reading know.

I'll just give a quick review for this prologue. I agree with the reviewers above. Even though this is a prologue, a little more description about the setting around the ...

Hi, Dana! Welcome to the YWS. I'm Razzker, but you can just call me Razz. I see that you've already reviewed my novel. :D I hope to read your work ...

Hi there! I've not reviewed a poem before, so this is my first try. The colors are hidden Within the mind, But will it create them Or leave them behind? ...

Thanks for the reviews, Freyja and DrowningInDarkness! : )

Hi, blackbird! Here as requested. Interesting story. I really like your writing style! I'm not going to nitpick, since I actually let myself enjoy the story. :P Plot : 9/10 ...

Sure thing, blackbird! : )

Zachary answered Shirley’s question. Aww, now this is overstating things. Nothing wrong with a "said!" It should be clear from his words that he's answering Shirley's question. Trust the readers' ...

Thank you for the (very in-depth) review! :D For what it's worth, I'm seeing this rod as the Millennium Rod from Yu-Gi-Oh. That's probably less your problem than mine, though. ...

Author's Note This is a story about vampires. Oh, I know what you're thinking. Another Twilight fan. No, actually, I've tried to make this story as original as possible. It ...

Hi there Kiwi! I'm Razzker, but you can call me Razz. Glad to see that we have similar interests. I myself prefer reading science-fiction, fantasy and non-sappy, non-cliched romantic stories ...

A wonderfully enjoyable read! Plot : 10/10 What can I say? It's not cliched at all. It was wonderful -- it was gripping, emotionally-charged and overall very interesting. I loved ...

An interesting beginning. Although ... a teen court? Hmm. Plot : 7/10 The plot was mildly interesting. Your story could have been opened up a lot more interestingly than just ...