Razcoon

I will do a normal review: Blue for comments, and red for corrections. --------------------------------------------------------------------- I saw eternal love in your eyes I saw the everlasting purit

Barke I hear the panicked thoughts of the girl Lulu who wanted me in the forest coming from somewhere nearby. Sighing, I turn towards the direction they're coming from. Captain ...

Barke That's one heck of a wake up call, I hear some girl think as I bolt up from bed. I don't know who this girl is, or what her ...

Flip As I ride through the forest on Winter, as I later identified the horse, my mind slowly begins to wander. Winter's skin is warm against mine, and his neck ...

Whoop-de-doo...

Quinn I look over at the scene before us and Clare drinking the rum. Jex and Tess are also staring in the same direction, watching. "So Cap'n's father is here?" ...

Name: Barke Age: 17 Gender: Male Appearance: With messy hair and no suit. Will post his normal clothes later. Personality: Spontaneous, confusing, irritable, sweet, cocky, usually happy, ambitious, cr

*WILL post I promise! I already promised, and I'm promising again!*

Naz Bored, I had wandered into the woods a little. I wasn't being stupid or reckless, I was at a safe height in a tree. There really wasn't anything interesting ...

When Laverna is any chance could she spot a black mare she recognizes as Anya because she knows Flip? Thanks]

Name Bianca Cane [If someone is trying to get on her nerves they will call her "Candy Cane" or "Sugar Cane".] Gender Female Age 22 Appearance [With better hair] Personality ...

Flip "I'll take those, thank you," I reply politely, lifting the oats into my arms and wondering what kind of ass would make an old man carry heavy sacks of ...

[This died a LONG time ago.]

Yeeeeah taffy!! You tell them! Now lyrics are hard to review, because it's YOUR opinion and YOUR words. So I'll just express my opinion: I completely agree! Young Writer's Society ...

*does the happy dance*