Razcoon

Granted, but this awesome thread no longer works. I wish more people would browse the lyrics forum.

Kudos, Kafka! :33

Just be sure you give me credit! Razcoon from YWS! And what site?

Kudos to everyone who did more reviews than me! (Not to mention kudos to Demi with her schadenfreude. ;)) You know, kudos to everyone in general. This was an awesome ...

Ellie>> Let us fall where we may From the greatest heights And we can hope to land Among the northern lights We are... We are... This appears thrice. xDD And ...

Snoink, I just wanted to say I really enjoyed this. The wording, the imagery, everything. My review is unneeded here, especially because...well, look above at all the other thorough reviews, ...

I’ll stand my ground Even after the battle Cuz 'Cause that’ll make me feel stronger Even if it’s not much longer I live my life day to day In the ...

[VERSE 1] I don’t like people, That’s just a fact. So you must be an alien, Or maybe just a yak. The rhyming seems forced here. Try to think of ...

This is a good poem! The holocaust sucked, I agree. There are parts where your rhyming seems forced and the rhythm needs a little smoothing out. Most of your periods ...

I know exactly what you mean. These thoughts have run through my head before. It's depressing, at times, when there are such wonderful things that remain unseen by the world. ...

Thank you very much! However, the x2 means repeat the whole stanza. "We are" five times in a row...I tend to agree...a little much...xD As for the whole quickly written ...

And Hunaz, just for you: Garret + Annie (= Garnie) His name has two Ts! :O And it's Razzyfur, thank you very much.

Rip it to shreds, reviewing wolves! Have at it! :smt003 -------------- Rain slicks over the roads Freezing on the asphalt No sweet symphonic codes To capture our delight - This ...

Lovely little conversation here...

Okay. I appreciate this, because I came on to review bad, depressing, emo, cutting, slit-wrist poems (those are easiest to review, methinks). Now, I happen to like morbid things (Laughing ...