RayquazaKid

Yes, thanks for the review. I fixed most of the things you pointed out (though there were a couple I disagreed with). Thanks so much though. :D Umm.. also in ...

Thanks for the review. Yea, I kind of agree that it is a bit corny, but it's really important in the story as the reader can know exactly what Arcadius ...

Hi, can you review this for me?

Hi, could you review this for me?

HEllo all. I would like to present the second chapter of my novel Survive. Of course, I would provide the link to the previous chapter but that thread seems to ...

All done! Enjoy the reviews everyone! :)

Again, excellent work. I didn't see any mistakes in this chapter per say... However, you seem to have a problem with tenses. When you do a paragraph describing places and ...

Thanks for the feedback. I don't know the finer aspects of poetry, and to be honest, I'm more comfortable writing novels. I tried really hard to make each line to ...

Here on request. Sorry I am so late. :) After reading it through, I must say this ones pretty clean. I didn't catch many flaws, which is really good. And ...

This is my first poetry, EVER. Please enjoy. :) It is into the fire that I will go. How I will fare, nobody shall ever know. For my malevolence is ...

Here I am, as you requested. :) Me? Investigating a high profile case? I couldn’t believe my ears as the caller on the other end informed me of Amanda Bailey’s ...

HEy there, here on request. :) I'm to do things a little differently here. “Eureka! I have found it at last,” I roared with excitement , waking up my wife, ...

Hey there, here on request. ;) First things first, boring sentence structure. Most of the time we see one statement and then another statement. There were many instances were you ...

Howdy there, here’s that review you requested. ;) (sorry, I would have had this earlier but I've been traveling recently.) I don’t have much to say, as this story is ...

Hey there, here on request. :) Ima have to say this right now, I liked this much better than the prologue (though that's normally the case). But really, the murder ...