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Done shibi, it's been posted in the thread. :) Anyone else?

Pretty good article. :) Like mostly everyone said, Skins beat everyone to the punch. I didn't see anything else wrong with it that he didn't pint out. Indeed, its a ...

CHLOE RUSSO 26th June 12: 54 AM We were forging ahead with the case. We had found some footprints which could possibly lead us to the criminal. Tim was not ...

I guess this is where I post this so... Boy, for a first novel this is one heck of a ride. For starters, I've had to do a lot for ...

thanks for the review mate :) WIth the previous ones, I still thing god should be lowercase, as it isn't refering to an actual deity. The long sentence, yes, I'll ...

I have posted the next chapter of my novel. Por favor? :D

Hello everyone. I would like to present the third chapter of my story Survive. In case you have not read the other two chapters, they can be found here This ...

I like to think I take writing very seriously. On one occasion I had to actually go outside and do some long distance measuring to find out stuff for my ...

Hey there. :) Did ignored her Shouldn’t that be Dad? We all know that you were and always will be jealous of Jordin.” Seems a little bit weird. Maybe it ...

Well PinkAngel, I cannot do a whole novel. The advanced critiques section of the forum could do that for you, but they have a different way of doing things over ...

It's allright. Im late on my reviews sometimes :P Now, I'm pretty sure that this takes place in a period-type era, so why is her hair pink? People didn't have ...

Hey there mate, here on request. :) First off, this is a nice chapter. For the most part you have good spelling and grammar. However, there were something that need ...

Yes, definitely skins :)

Huh, that's weird. In the original post they are italicized... I wonder what happened between then and your review. :? I also love how according to spell checker, your character ...

Sorry, I don't have enough time to go through the whole thing and point out the mistakes. I'll jsut give a shorter version. FIrst off, I loved the side moment ...