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Re: All the way
I loved this because it has sort of a hidden meaning to it. I think we all want to run away sometimes and this is exactly how I would picture ...
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Re: Smell The Rose
This is abit confusing when it gets to the second stanza, like you didn't know exactly what to do next. In the second stanza all of a sudden you start ...
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Re: Dread the Dark
I really love this poem!!!! I love the entire theme and rhyming scheme (no rhyme intended). The imagery you have in your writing is just amazing! This review probably isn't ...
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Re: You left her
I really liked this poem!! I liked the rhyming scheme, it wasn't overwhelming, it was subtle. Something to say: I feel really bad for the girl, I could feel her ...
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Re: Bored....No Joke
Hahaha, I like this poem a lot!!! :) Everything you said here is true! I feel exactly like that right now! But agreeing with Sionarama, the last line is a ...
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Re: ...To Be A Snowflake...
This was a really good poem! Ironically, I actually was going to write about comparing myself to a snowflake....But anyway, very well done. You used descriptive words making the poem ...
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Re: Hello Everyone!
Hey Lindsey! You're gsppcrock10's little sister, huh? I'm friend's with your sister! I am in love with Owl City, my favorite song by them is Butterfly Wings. I've never reviewed ...
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Re: Seasons Greetings from Me to You
Haha, cool. How did you make that? I love the colors and everything!! This is like the perfect Holiday Greeting! Good job(I love frosty the snowman, who doesn't??) and Merry ...
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Re: The Fall
This was a very good poem! In the last couple of stanzas it got a little depressing though(unless I am deciphering it wrong), I thought it would have a more ...
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Re: Forgotten.
This was great! I liked the subtle rhyming you had going on. Don't worry, I also have the Incapablity-to-write-happy-things-syndrome. But that isn't bad!!!! The best ideas come out of depressing ...
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Re: My Soul Mate
This was interesting poem. It does feel that you wrote this from a personal experience so I won't say too much. She’s just so full of life, And always so ...
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Re: Should I keep writing this?
I definetly think that you should continue this, its good. The last paragraph got me confused with all the names and whatnot. But I can relate to this. Keep going, ...
Dec 15, 2010 -
Re: Major feedback needed.
I thought that it was a little out of focus, and that there wasn't much to look at. Possibly if you had another thing in with the orniment that it ...
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Re: Paintings
These are amazing!!! I like all of them, I love the creativity and beauty you put into your paintings! I especially like the 1st, 3rd, and 5th ones! Keep writing ...
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Re: Anorexia of the Soul
This was a good piece but I wasn't exactly sure what kind of rythme you were going for, it didn't rhyme in the beginning and then suddenly it does. This ...
Dec 15, 2010
