Rayneisthename

uhhhhhhhh. Is this a joke or like a metaphor for something? Because I don't want to go all deep on you if there's really no need for it.

I liked this story a lot, there was just confusion due to the choice of your words. In the third paragraph why would Daniel call his granddad the old man? ...

I like this poem and especially this line: If the flow of poetry hadn’t been real It explains why the flow of the poem just stopped and I also think ...

I like this poem very much. I think that a lot of people can relate to this, even myself. But will they be there in the end? that was the ...

uhhhhhhh. This is so confusing (and I'm being honest here) that I can't even put it into words. In the beginning there is no flow at all and then it ...

Wow this is really good. I loved the twist at the ending but like Confetti said I would take out the 'cause' because it ruins the dramatics at the end. ...

Prologue The first time I saw him, he was walking down the hall on the first day of school for the 10th grade. His hair was a natural blue-black and ...

I just kinda wanted to people to read this..... I just came up with this in English class today and i thought it was pretty good(and cute!) for coming up ...

this is really good! How did you make this? I love all the colors and everything! These colors remind me of Valentine's Day(which is coming up) and the hardships that ...

This was very good! I liked all the things you described and I can relate to this too. My ex-best friend did this to me two years ago and I ...

I really liked this, I love the colors and everything! I would take StoryWeaver's advice and crop out some of the sky though. And oh my god, this was taken ...

I always meant to review this peom but never got around too it! This is wonderful and it has a lot of feeling in it. I really like the entire ...

This is a poem I wrote like 10 minutes ago on a whim. I have all these points and nothing to post, so here it goes..... Feel free to rip ...

I liked this poem a lot, it had a few flaws though..... But being popular is more important to you, I suppose. But why must you be so ignorant, only ...

This was a very bouncy-fun poem to read! I loved everything! Death said, “In order to be free, I would have something to lose,” These lines are kind of confusing, ...