RayneChild

Wow, this was pretty good! I liked the suspense and the mystery vibe. Here's what I found: The phone trilled again; a hollow screech in an other words hollow house. ...

Hello there! :) I'm glad you finally got a little more detailed as to who the boy is. It really sets the story in motion. Very good! There were a ...

This was really interesting! I enjoyed it! It had a hint of suspense to it, kinda that fear aspect. All in all it was pretty good. Mostly, I just noticed ...

Um, sure :) I need to think of the storyline, but sure. I'll get started on that asap! Thanks so much for the suggestion!

:) Of course you weren't too harsh. I see now what you mean by the paws. The tail is just my traditional style, but I've gotten a little better since ...

Okay! I fixed the fire - eye thing. I hope it works now :) And Trikky, about the 'smiling' thing: this cat does ;) Lol. I couldn't think of another ...

Thanks for the critiques! They're always so helpful. I'll fix those straight away! I'm so glad you liked it n_n I see where you're coming from, so I think I'll ...

Also, Telina, no, I didn't draw my avatar. I colored the lineart, but I didn't draw it. Thanks for asking :)

Yeah, I'm not entirely pleased with the way Rayne turned out. And thanks for pointing out the unlevelness - I never noticed that before! I guess it doesn't help that ...

Thanks so much! Your critiques really help! I guess I could have made Tyranny a little fuzzier. And I agree, the tails are unusually large. I've improved since I drew ...

Thank you guys so much! Just one little thing though: He does have an eye...it's just closed. I know it's kinda hard to see, but it's there. It's probably just ...

I like it! :D Poor Dem...What happened to me?! Lol. And why is Osoroshii gone? And where is she? So many questions!!! *gasp!* Lol. I can't wait to read the ...

Oh, wow! This was amazing! Really, really good. Your word choice was phenomenal; I had a vivid picture in my mind the whole time. It was like a movie...! I ...

This was fantastic! I loved it! Like a few other people mentioned, there is no setting for this story. When I read it, I though of 18th century London-ish, but ...

Ain't they cute? Rayne and Tyranny as puppies. OMG Rayne's markings were so hard to make with her sitting in that position! I took the poses from two 101 Dalmatians ...