RayneChild

Hi n_n Just responding to your invite :D Here's my characters: Name: Rayne Age: 3 years Gender: Female Pack: Yellow Hill Appearance: My avatar ^^ or: Black, golden yellow, and ...

Lol. Okay: VampireBloodrace: XD I know! Her tail is so...*poof* n_n No, I didn't draw her on Word. I drew her on paper, took a picture, and colored and edited ...

Hey! I was wondering if you could review my Hellfire story: I want it to be my first book, so I need as many reviews as possible. Thanks so much ...

Lol I see what you guys mean about her body. But the intention was just to have the head. I may go back and add a body. Thanks for the ...

I know some of her...features...may be a little much, but that particular one was the birth of Nightfall. It's her most recognizable feature that she absolutely CANNOT go without. So, ...

Okay. Lol. I know it's short, but this is all the dream was. There was nothing else to it, so I don't how I know what had happened throughout the ...

I couldn't quite remember all of it, so the parts that were blank I filled in myself n_n Names have been changed to protect the innocent ;) If you want ...

Thanks for the crits and comments! They really help! And, Noemi?(VampireBloodrace): The striking pain in my head told me that this was no dream – I was wide awake. Lol, ...

Okay, this is Nightfall. My emo, depressed, Cat Queen. She, next to Rayne, is one of my most badass characters ;) Lol. She represents my "dark side" and everything evil ...

Puppy Rayne meets her first snowflake! ^^ Ain't she coote? Lol. This was fun. I know it isn't really winter anymore, but I've had this picture sitting around on my ...

It's kinda cheesy, but it was a writing assignment in 8th grade last year, and I had writer's block with my other idea xD Hope you like it :) I ...

This was really deep, and dark, and kinda scary. Omg! You were finally deep! :D Woo! Lol. It was really descriptive, and I could see it all clearly in my ...

Thanks so much for your reviews! I changed those for you to the best of my ability. If you have anything else, please let me know! I hope you enjoyed ...

A low, deep growl emerged from my throat as I watched him. I could already taste him; his flesh in my mouth, his blood running down my throat, my teeth ...

Hello again! I love how you made the transition from dark and mysterious to bright and somewhat uplifting. It was really funny ^_^ On to the critiquing! I groaned and ...