RavenRanger

Thanks for the suggestions! I will check and edit my work more. I hope that I can make all the details make sense in the coming chapters.

I can't answer the who question because of spoilers. Once again this is hard to explain, but the events of the prologue are technically set in our future. However, time ...

Thank you for the review! It's very helpful. I hope that I will be able to continue to provide a story that is enjoyable, haha. For the prologue, it's more ...

Wow, that's a long review! Thank you so much for the optimism towards the development of my story. First of all, to clarify, the character in the prologue is not ...

Haha, don't worry. I'm not offended in the least. Thanks for the very thorough review. This is the prologue of the story which should start to make sense when the ...