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  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: He Could Not Escape

    I really like this poem because of the story it tells. I only have a few suggestions. The second line doesn't make much sense. I recommend changing it to "He ...

    Mar 7, 2012


Should we not walk? On our feet? The ones I now have again? I do like my feet. They are befittingly perambulatory.
— Pattern (Rhythm of War by Brandon Sanderson)