Ratter-chan

I said defense. My freakish Mac computer thinks "defence" isn't a word. YWS says it's a word. I looked at all the choices so long, the only one that looks ...

Wow! *applauds* That was even better! You explained so much more, and still kept it funny all the way through. ^-^ I liked how you explained what happened right before ...

Ok. That was absolutely hilarious! *laughs hysterically* You did a wonderful job! It started great, very eye-catching. ^-^ The imagery was very good, all of your characters were very different. ...

Aw, it is so cute! I just want to run up and hug it! *attempts to run/hug through computer* Owww..... Anyway, :backtotopic:! As I said before, it's adorable. ^-^ It ...

I chose "Till"! The other one isn't even a real word. Well, at least the dictionary says it's not. ......THE DICTIONARY HAS SPOKEN!!

Wee! People replied! I feel so loved. ^-^ Anyway, to answer D's - I hope you don't mind me calling you that - questions; I like writing somewhat dark things, ...

Wow. I read all of the parts of this story and I can't wait for the next! All of your characters have their own personalities, and your imagery is great(although ...

Wonderful story! It was written very well and I loved the imagery, especially this part: There was Saria, her smile more beautiful to me now than I could have ever ...

That was a little twisted, but nonetheless, it was awesomely hilarious! XD If everyone was named like that, I bet it would be REALLY weird! It's a very neat idea, ...

That was really good! Very well written, but I think you should split it into paragraphs. That would make it easier to follow. It was great overall, maybe it could ...

That was so beautifully written. It had a lot of emotion in it, sad, but good. As far as I see, there were no errors. Also, very good imagery. It ...

That was a wonderful poem! Your rhythm was great and the lines always rhymed. The best part was the end, that was hilarious. It probably would've been a little better ...

All Dressed in Black Miss Mary Mack, Mack, Mack, All dressed in black, black, black, You took her head, head, head, She wants it back, back ,back, You cannot run, ...

Well here it goes; My name is Ratter-chan... Or is it? ...Ok, it is. I'm new to the Young Writers Society. (Why else do people post in this section?) I ...