RatchetWriter

Hey, don't be in to much of a hurry, even though it's fanfiction. It's good to wait at least 3 days for other people to see and crit, and give ...

Saint Razorblade - Thanks for the crit! I'll be sure to ask you if I can't figure out something. I never knew that jolly roger fact! Actually while it has ...

Thanks Shadowtwit, I read my story over and over for a while, and I now agree, it is a little cliche, maybe I could just use a different word than ...

Magicman - Thanks for the crit. I thought about the last line, and yeah, now that I realize it, that totally sounds terrible. I have to at least remove it. ...

sokool - Thanks for the crit. Heheh, yeah, it kinda does tell, but I'd written this quite awhile ago, and just found it it my finished stories folder, so I ...

Oh what a wonderful feeling when everything comes out. :D And then *sob* it's all over! :cry: Anyway. First thing. Count on County for the Bounty! Ridiculous… So true and ...

Shazam! I love this story! Maybe you should put it in a link in your signature to get more people to read it. It's great! Okay, didn't notice many typos ...

'Ello Sam. :lol: I bet that SOO annoys you, sorry, how very mean I am. Anyway. Thank you for the crit, I'm late responding, oh well. Grr, I never get ...

Ah! Thank you! You have made your point. I like most of the changes you suggest. Also, I try to show, it's hard. Thank you for clarifying your opinons, I ...

Oh my, sorry I haven't posted on your work. I spotted some typos, but mainly I wanted to tell you that you really have a captivating story here. The plot ...

Hey Thanks! I didn't really think anyone would want to give me their ideas. :D I might use the first one, I really like your idea of the made up ...

Ahem, Griffin. I appreciate the long in depth crit. I think I will follow some of what you said. However. I feel that you are telling me to write in ...

Thanks greenjay. I agree to most of the things that you mentioned, I already have a few chapters written of this story and I'm trying to follow most of those ...

Bian - Thanks I think that is right, it sounds better anyway. Yes I have realized that the first time you hear Harestin talk it sounds a bit to much ...

Uh... sorry for telling :cry: What is the Paolini path? Yeah, I want to see Ratatoille! It looks funny. I guess I do have a lot of commas, but I ...