RatchetWriter

Thanks Grif, I thought about it for a while, I think you are right. I guess I just imagined big ships with banks of oars... isn't that what tiremes are? ...

Hey, very intresting and well written. Basicly it's very good, but it took me awhile to tell the way you were writing this, it's a different style than normal. Good ...

Uh, well I guess I should read your story first. :lol: But I'd have to say boy. I must uphold the future of...um... boy unicorns? :D (that was supposed to ...

Thanks for the comments! Very encouraging, I wasn't sure that I improved at all. I'll be sure to correct that mistake too. Next section coming soon!

Ban Fred? NOOOO!!!!!! I love him! He's a great friend, and so fun to talk to.

Haha, I didn't think of that. Well I'll have to change that. *sighs audibly and once again goes to edit*

Hello Shireling! Welcome and feel free to ask a younger brother for a crit! :lol: Enjoy!

Thanks for the crits! (I'll take more :D ) Okay, first of all, I named my character because I liked the idea. It's pronounced Hare-es-stin, not Hare-stin, if that's what ...

NOTE: Harestin in it's rather short entirety is under work, most of what's up will not exist when it is continued. Just because it's written bad. And I'm plotting my ...

Hey! More of a really good story! If you can get 20 or 30 chapters you may want to try publishing this! Hope you're still enjoying writing this, becuase I'm ...

Holy Smokes! Okay sorry guys, I just don't think I'm going to be able to keep up with this. Guess my characters boat sunk and everybody drowned. Unless someone else ...

Hello! I had trouble with the site to, don't worry, there's a FAQ, and everyones friendly! (at least everyone I've met, but of course that's not a lot of people ...

Hello! Don't worry about someone stealing this, Nate is making a copyright policy to prevent this. I'm happy about it to, I don't want my stuff stolen. Okay, I'm not ...

I'm not sure. Either I would totally want MY plot, MY writing and MY characters, or I would just leave the writing to the other person, and toss ideas at ...

Hey! Great story! All I got to say is it's nice you had them screeching around corners when you described the character, it makes it seem like their going somewhere ...