RatchetWriter

Hmm, sorry I haven't posted on this very soon. Ahem, pic is actually............................er.................. :oops: Better than I can draw a human. :lol: Pretty good I think actually. Enough o

Oh my, sorry I haven't posted on your work. I spotted some typos, but mainly I wanted to tell you that you really have a captivating story here. The plot ...

Hey Thanks! I didn't really think anyone would want to give me their ideas. :D I might use the first one, I really like your idea of the made up ...

Name: Zuinar Kleb Creature: Human Age: 32 Height: 5’9” Weight: 154 Looks: Dark red-brown hair. Smallish build, quick, wiry. Personality: Kind of out of it, yet somehow seeming to be ...

Ahem, Griffin. I appreciate the long in depth crit. I think I will follow some of what you said. However. I feel that you are telling me to write in ...

Thanks greenjay. I agree to most of the things that you mentioned, I already have a few chapters written of this story and I'm trying to follow most of those ...

Duster Spray (try spraying it at fire, it's really cool) (er, maybe you shouldn't try :lol: )

Hmm, very sad kind of. (maybe it's because I'm listening to sad celtic music :D ) I'm not much for poetry, but its difference to other things was intresting and ...

Bian - Thanks I think that is right, it sounds better anyway. Yes I have realized that the first time you hear Harestin talk it sounds a bit to much ...

Chapter One. EDITED! YAY! Finaly, takes me so long. I still haven't decided if I'm going to change the Harestins first speech. Also, I am currently working on Covter's home. ...

Hello! Your english really isn't that bad. I didn't see much anyway. (course I never see anything in stories either :lol: ) Anyway PM me if you want an encouraging ...

Hello! I love to read to! PM me if you need anything! (though I might not be any help :lol: ) And if you want an encouraging crit, you can ...

All Creatures Wise And Wonderful, James Herroit. Good books, you just don't seem to get tired of him.

IT'S SO FUN TO THINK UP CHARACTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D Mainly I write because it's fun, you think up your own world sometimes, you think up your own weapons, and ...

Ok, I, with my inexperience in grammar, I am not going to find anything of that sort, as everyone else has done that. (I guess that's the advantage of criting ...