RatchetWriter

Ah.... Very Nice! I don't think anything needs to be done to it, my personal opinon. As for which is better... Well the first I kind of like better, but ...

Hey cool! I may have to check the local prices around here though. :lol: Magicman and Claudette sound good. :D Anyway, what does Cabassi mean? Or CCF? Constant Crits Fmaily? ...

sokool - Thanks for the crit. Heheh, yeah, it kinda does tell, but I'd written this quite awhile ago, and just found it it my finished stories folder, so I ...

Okay, let me get this down, THIS STORY HAS LOTS OF GRAMMAR THINGYS! That's because of the way it's written. So please, don't go on a grammar nazi rant. I'd ...

Hm, I have to give some thought on this one. Hardbacks are durable, but expensive. (yup, I'm another cheapy) Durability is nice though when you get it, and the covers ...

Oh nice! All the plot ideas and things swirling all over the place. This story could go lots of directions! I'm looking forward to which way it will go though. ...

The Outcast by Brian Jacques. LOTR eh? Very good and cool books they be. :D

Ah... A very nice read. I don't know about poetry though. Anyways Admiring you Jade eyes only in memory. I don't know if I'm right or not, maybe you meant ...

Oh man. I've been gone for a week and have just read this. SCARIEST THING I'VE READ IN A LONG TIME! But so very holding...... Sadly I haven't anything to ...

Gatorade. (Mmmmm)

Oh what a wonderful feeling when everything comes out. :D And then *sob* it's all over! :cry: Anyway. First thing. Count on County for the Bounty! Ridiculous… So true and ...

Shazam! I love this story! Maybe you should put it in a link in your signature to get more people to read it. It's great! Okay, didn't notice many typos ...

'Ello Sam. :lol: I bet that SOO annoys you, sorry, how very mean I am. Anyway. Thank you for the crit, I'm late responding, oh well. Grr, I never get ...

A comfy couch (and book :D )

Ah! Thank you! You have made your point. I like most of the changes you suggest. Also, I try to show, it's hard. Thank you for clarifying your opinons, I ...