RatchetWriter

Hello! Have a great time here! There are a lot of very helpful people, like Cluadette and WritersDomain and all the mods and not so much me. :D But feel ...

Chapter III “No! You can’t go!” Hedfeldon stated indignantly. “Why not?” Answered Harestin calmly. “Because we need you here helping with the field.” “It isn’t that hard to watch it ...

Thanks Shadowtwit, I read my story over and over for a while, and I now agree, it is a little cliche, maybe I could just use a different word than ...

8/10 The design is nice, but I think I can see a griffin/eagle in their? That's what is cool. The griffin/eagle in a nice design.

HAHAHAHA!!!!!! Oh this is hilarious! I was thinking about how many people are addicted to Harry Potter, oh no, I feel the pull to! AHH!!! So funny. Hmm... for helpfulness, ...

Magicman - Thanks for the crit. I thought about the last line, and yeah, now that I realize it, that totally sounds terrible. I have to at least remove it. ...

Chapter II Red eyes glowering out of the darkness. That’s what Wringe could see. Red eyes and a grating voice threatening to tear him apart if he didn’t finish his ...

Zuin Kor marched quickly, and steadily down the white corridor, a repulserlift sled in front of him containing a man. Turning left he punched a door button and entered. He ...

YAY! I've finally posted! Sorry I didn't sooner when this thing was close to begining. Name: Zuin Kor Creature: Human Age: 32 Height: 5’9” Weight: 154 Looks: Dark red-brown hair. ...

8/10 --- I don't know what it is but it's neat! (in an intresting way) (and if you've never played Ratchet and Clank, you wouldn't get my avatar, it's a ...

Frames. (^^ Nice socks!) (methinks that DQ Ariane and DQ Miribelle are related perchance?)

10/10 Okay maybe it is easy to get a good rating from me. I like it a lot, has a sort of *powerful sorceress* feel to it. (more than normal ...

Flash. The RW

Hmm... Well about all I can say is I like it. I don't want to be annoying and simply say that, but I can't think of anything wrong. Um... I ...

Hmmm.......... Nothing really except for one thing. I don't see much of Nate. I mean it's nice to know what the head honcho is like an all. It's nice to ...