RatchetWriter

Sweet story... 8) Okay, that aside I have to be helpful now. The first thing is the long block of writing needs to be broken up, I've a suggestion or ...

Hey, don't be in to much of a hurry, even though it's fanfiction. It's good to wait at least 3 days for other people to see and crit, and give ...

I just maniacally love how smart the plot always is, the Eternity Code is amazing! The second thing that is great is the character development. So superb you can almost ...

Hey, Pretty good work! I saw no grammar mistakes, and the way it is read, it could almost come right out of Redwall. Simply said though, before this piece, some ...

Very intresting! I've never played the game, so that made it funner to read. Vocabulary was nice, the words were very epic and intro-like. Let's see.... each paragraph was written ...

Good description! A few minor typos: She had just enought time, she thought, allowing herself a small smile. And he watch her go. I'm thinking you meant - and he'd ...

The rhythm was so good I conducted it with my hand. :smt038 The one bit has been torn up, and the only other thing I see is Courage, christened David ...

Nice! I went back to your other start, and I actually like it better, but anyway... This section was well written. The characters felt real, and the ecitement and kindness ...

Hey, look who finally got around to reading this. :oops: Well, I haven't got help, just an opinion. Personally I love the races, and how they talk so far, the ...

8/10 Very smooth animation, and I like how the *ahem* shall we say, saliva sticks. :) But I do lke real kitties better. :wink:

9.5/10 I love sketch! I don't know what it is though. Mabe add a tad more to it? Nah. (The kitty is funny! :D )

8/10 While I'm not a fan of anime, I think it's very well done. Especially the way the same persons hair flows together.

Saint Razorblade - Thanks for the crit! I'll be sure to ask you if I can't figure out something. I never knew that jolly roger fact! Actually while it has ...

A bunch of unfinished and un-edited beginings for my story, which one do you like best? It was a beautiful early spring morn, the sun was rising with a healthy ...

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