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This line seems out of place and unending. like it's unfinished. maybe you should try to rewrite or rephrase this. Thinking of all the ones who will neglect Putting up ...

To take out the appropriate time to review your work I'll probably qwait until after christmas to do my critque

Im really sorry but instead of giving you a bad review I wont review because I don't like the story line any other offers??

I guess im the first to review your work! Yay! Ok the last line seems to awkwardly fit to the poem, maybe you should rephrase it or take it out ...

I posted your review Any one else??????

Im here as you requested :) There seems to be alot of critques for this piece so mine will be short and simple. There seem to be some gramor mistakes ...

Thanks everybody for the great critques!!!!!

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Thanks for the first part of my review! It was awesome.

ow thanks for the awesome critque

Thank you so much. Im glad you think I have captured a four year old perfectly, because I dont think I have. I want her to be more realistic to ...

romantic fiction: Will you review ??? Tiff

romantic fiction: review please??? tiff

romantic fiction: review please??? Tiff

romantic fiction: Please review??? Tiff