Rascalover

Hey! hope ya have a wonderful time here, and can't wait to see some of your work feel free to pm Tiffany

Hey! hope ya have a wonderful time here, and can't wait to see some of your work feel free to pm :) Tiffany

??? Boredom here......

Like Knightlyangel09 said this was very impactful and the changing of the nursery rythmes was amazing awesome job!!!

Did your review hoped it was helpful, loved the story! anyone else???

Love the story line; you'll have to pm with more! Ok so you're missing a few comas, and tense phrasing, but with a quick self editing you could fix that. ...

Hormones or something. I can’t remember. this could be one sentence if you put a come inbetween something and I. Shelly (my ridiculously inept step-mother) still hasn’t given me the ...

Any one else need a review???

well I really need my third chapter to be reviewed. Its not really important to know what "Silent Hill" is, even though its a fanfiction. All you need to know ...

Don't worry if you don't have time. If you do take as long as you like *-) If you do get round to it then thanks so much :D It's ...

I would love to see more emotion and nasty description!!! For example while they first meet the hideous beast Beth should feel more emotions as scared nervous frightened stiff. There ...

Ok I was fairly interested... I think the beginning should be spruced up a bit. It is merely uninteresting. Your beginning needs to be the one thing that draws people ...

reviewing now :)

Im sorry its taken so long but I promise ill still do the review

Awesome poem. It was very creative and good for a first start. warder I dont think this word fit well here. Try to come up with some thing to help ...