Rascalover

All done hope they were helpful Any more???? please :)

I do to stop it? This doesnt fit here it interupts the flow of the poem. I thought it to be well written but you try to hard to make ...

Wow I really like this one. Nice rythming technic and good topic! its very relatable. So harsh you seem, So cold you appear, But it's all an act, a cover, ...

the whole thing seems kind of bland, maybe use some spicy words to tone it up. It reaches a new level within us. It can make us rise, command us ...

Do I need to beg? ahah come on guys!

Ahahah thats super funny, but so do I and Im glad you guys like the pictures

I would love to have it but I dont have anything for you to review :cry: :cry:

I dreamed. this seems uneeded and a bit awkward I would try getting rid of it. I dreamed the most beautiful of dreams. My love, you were there too. I ...

I love Rascall Flatts, lol. The snow angel was pretty but the rest--were kind of random, lol. Next, try focassing on an object, a pretty one that someone would want ...

I love your theme, and nist if your wording. Im sorry that I am not a grammar naziso I won't scream or even fix most puncuation and such because im ...

Does no one need a REVIEW? :cry: pretty please wet me review something?

Snow angel Bricks "Amazing Grace" Another tree I know ahah Fetch? The last of the trees A child (yes I got permission) My cousin in the snow :) Last but ...

While I was being beaten with snowballs I got a few snaps in I hope you like them :) A Tree (lots of these) The Swing :) The Shed (not ...

Actually it's kind of a flashback because when chapter one starts it's later in their lives sooo.... is it still good that way? I dont know I have never written ...

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