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Re: Tribute to Puck the Fairy
I have never read a Midnight Summers Dream. So I will not know who Puck is. maybe you should describe him a little more, and give more detail, maybe some ...
May 14, 2009 -
Re: sadness (completely rewritten)
Sadness. The burning sensation that scorched my insides with a wildfire The icy cold clarity of what my heart unfolded to my mind. My thoughts, as dark and menacing as ...
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Re: Hand
... This pulls the reader in, I liked it very much! It makes me interested in the rest of the poem. i'm usually not a big fan of poems but ...
May 14, 2009 -
Re: Poem for a Fallen Soldier
But what happens then? When your shell has fallen? You are left with nothing but your pain. I just wanted to stay that was my favorite stanze by all means. ...
May 14, 2009 -
Re: 19 minutes by Jodi Picoult
seriously! I had that book in my hands going to read it then i decided not too. now ill just have to get it at the library :)
May 14, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Love You
Thanks for the suggestions :)
May 14, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Love You(2)
Thanks so much for the great reviews :) I do realize im not putting as much emotion and detail in it as I should and I am working on it. ...
May 14, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Love You(2)
Chapter two The next day Gary had to go back to the studio, while Jay was at the hospital with Isabella, alone. He took her hand and sighed. Jay’s feelings ...
May 8, 2009 -
Re: Sunset
Im not great at critquing pictures, but I just wanted to say this is a beautiful pictuter. As cliche as it I can't take my eyes away. The lone bird ...
May 8, 2009 -
Re: Battle School
ahah no I dont but my firend was like what's that and instead of writing door i put enter here :) Thanks, Im glad you liked it and once again ...
May 8, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Love You
Thanks for the feedback:)
May 8, 2009 -
Re: A Drawing of a Crying Girl
I absolutely love this piecer. Of course it's not flawless, but it's darn near perfect. The hair looks soo real I want to reach out adn touch it. Oh my ...
May 8, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Love You
Thank you for such an awesome review! i will work on it some more. See the thing is i have already written this piece of work which has about 15 ...
May 7, 2009 -
Re: Will Review Anything!!
I have recently posted a new romantic fiction piece and all the reviews I have been getting are good, and thats it just good. I need some one to give ...
May 7, 2009 -
Re: Battle School
So I have never been an artist and still am not one. I have never been able to draw anything that resmebled what I wanted it to be, but by ...
May 7, 2009
