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Thanks so much :)

I have never critqued lyrics before, but I just waned to tell you that I loved it! I think it would be a very well written and sang song. I ...

“Annie by having sex with you I have given myself only two options and you only one.” There should be a comma after Annie :) I am only 19. I ...

Will you pretty please review chapter five of my romantic fiction piece let me love you ?? please and thank you -Tiffany

Can you pretty please review my romantic fiction piece called Let Me Love You (chapter five) ?? -Tiffany

Hey just wanna give you a happy welcome to YWS! I really hope you can review my romantic fiction piece called Let Me Love You (chapter five) glad to be ...

Thanks for the request good poem Any one else needin' a review ??????????

Like the other reviewers I think this poem would be better if the lines were short and choppy. For example: Thousands of lives rest on a single blade. The choice ...

Thanks so much for the review. I dont take it as a bad critque. I definately think the characters are too detatched I just dont know how to fix it ...

Do I have to beg??? :)

Chapter five Gary was awaken by loud chatter downstairs. His scruffy hair fell into his eyes as he swung his legs over the edge of the bed. His body was ...

I really like this photograph :) The light fals on it undisturbed and matching the sort of gloomy-ness of the mermorial and wehat it stands for. I had to memorize ...

I hold out my hand, grasping, reaching, Needing someone to hold it, grasp it. A warm hand encloses it, squeezes it, Let's me know they'll be there, always. The reppition ...

amen to that! :)

I really loved this. Um Im not great at critquing photography, but i just wanted to drop by and say you did an awesome job. My favorite I would have ...