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The human mind is difficult to predict, This is bland, and kind of boring. You need the opening line to draw the readers in and hook them so that they're ...

Thank you for your advice :)

ya know ya need one :)

thank you very much :) im glad you enjoyed it :)

Yes i have in romantic fiction I have posted 6 chapters of a story Ill put a passage of one in the beginning of this thread :)

Thanks for an awesome review :)

Can you pretty please review my romantic fiction piece its chapter six Im sorry I didnt read your first post so i cant remember if you review romantic fiction, and ...

Can you pretty please review chapter six of my romantic fiction piece called Let Me Love You please and thank you :) -Tiffany

Ok, I don't know if there is a thread for this already, and if there is I'm sorry, but I need help with this. i have six chapters of my ...

Before I review this I want to give you a big happy welcome to YWS and to let you know that before you post somthing you have to give two ...

*Warning: This is rated pg-13 because of a love sence that occurs* Chapter six With out waking up Gary, Isabella got up early that morning to meet Jay at the ...

Im sorry to say that this won't be a very helpful review, but I love this piece and would be very grateful if you pmed me when you posted more ...

I am Rufus Little. This is my story. A story of the present days and a lot of harking back to the past. I had to say, I just love ...

All done :) Any one out there needing a review???

I smiled as I watched a clear, crystal wave bash against the hard rocks of the shore like a lion attacking it's pray. I had the most perfect life. Nothing ...